How's My Driving?

[chesstotem]

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[chesstotem]

Good. I try to avoid making her a cipher - it'd be easy to do, since we know so little about her. *g*

Quirky is good! I think Arthur *is* quirky - obviously not as straight-laced as he tries to make himself out to be!

[notforthemoney.livejournal.com]

We know so little about all of them, really. Just hints and images, tugging at the corner of our vision. Elusive.

My take on Arthur has him so controlled now because he needs to be.

[chesstotem]

I look forward to finding out more!

[notforthemoney.livejournal.com]

Thank you. As do I. He's only telling me on a need-yo-know basis...

[chesstotem]

Oh, I definitely know how that is. LOL